Jutsus

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JUTSU NAME: Unrelenting rage
TYPE: Taijutsu/Ninjutsu
ELEMENT:lightning
Grade: C-
DETAILS:Patrick loses composure and recklessly attacks any opposing threat. His speed and strength increases, but his use for Jutsus decreases greatly.
DRAWBACKS: Biggest draw back is that after entering unrelenting rage, Patrick's stamina,strength, speed, and chakra are almost depleted. a good attack could easily kill him.

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JUTSU NAME: Lightning wave
TYPE: Ninjutsu
ELEMENT: lightning
RANK: C
DETAILS: Patrick uses chakra through his twin chokutos and sends a wave of electricity towards his opponent (straight forward) which can deal some good damage if it connects. He can send it on the ground as well, which paralyzes his opponents rather than a damaging attack.
DRAWBACKS: This is more of a last resort, and if used early, he needs at least 15-20 minutes just to get enough chakra back to do more moves let alone defend himself.

[Smyles]

You seem to be limiting these jutsu to greatly. Like they are nice jutsu, but the drawbacks are just like "Woah man, slow down." I'd say lower the drawbacks, and put a little more detail into the details of each jutsu.

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What are some good ideas to better it? If you don't mind me asking.

[Smyles]

Well be logical with the drawbacks for starters. Like if these are only C-Class jutsu then they wouldn't bring you near death. For example.